A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior high school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.
When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty in Learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation. I could not get high marks and my grammar was not right at all. Frustrated and afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class. When Miss Li found out my situation, she encouraged me and lent me a hand. She patiently taught me English grammar, helped me understand how to write a good sentence,and lent me many English books and magazines, which rapidly improved my English. With her help, I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.
Miss Li, like a shining star, shines in my path of success.
一个好老师对学生来说就像一颗闪亮的星。李老师，我高中时的英语老师，就是我生命中一颗闪亮的星。
刚上高中时，我英语学得很吃力。我不敢在公开场合开口说英语，因为我的.语音、语调很糟糕。英语成绩很差’，语法一蹋糊涂。灰心、失望、羞于被嘲笑，所以英语课上我从来不单手回答问题。李老师发现我的情况后，向我伸出了援助之手，鼓励我。她认真地教我语法，教我如何写好句子，还借给我许多英语书和杂志。这一切都使得我很快提高了英语水平。在她的帮助下，我渐渐对英语感兴趣了，成绩也提高了。
李老师，就像一颗闪亮的星照耀着我前进的道路。
